
Minds at Work
After Monica’s tragic death, her three male friends decide to honor her memory by publishing her work and sharing her message of female empowerment. However, when unrequited love and unchecked ambition are at play, chaos ensues, and commemoration is met with destruction.
This play is very loosely inspired by figures in the Transcendentalist Movement and has won Washington University in St. Louis’ A.E. Hotchner Playwriting Competition.
In the scene below Monica is talking to the wives of the Transcendentalist leaders, hoping to inspire them to look beyond the roles and duties society has prescribed to them.
Scene Six
Setting: A flashback to a women’s meeting at Elliot and Patricia’s house. The living room is very simple and neat except for a few books that lay on the coffee table.
At Rise: Patricia, Monica, Eileen, Gertrude, and Alexandra are all sitting
around the den enjoying tea and conversing.
EILEEN
Thomas really gets on my nerves about it. I understand that he is finding himself, but he cannot just abandon his duties to me and the children. He is their father.
GERTRUDE
I completely understand.
ALEXANDRA
I said the same thing to Henry.
EILEEN
Did it help? Did he change?
ALEXANDRA
Um… In some ways. He took Daniel with him when he went on his “thinking walks”.
EILEEN
Is that the best they can do? I mean… Well Patricia, is Elliot this way?
PATRICIA
Oh… um… He is a very good father.
GERTRUDE
But does he spend time with you and the kids? Richard does not even seem happy at dinner. It is as if it were a burden in his day to be around us.
ALEXANDRA
And the second dinner is over, they are off again into their studies.
(Gertrude and Eileen mumble in agreement.)
PATRICIA
Oh no. Elliot does have his moments, but he loves spending time with Harry and Phoebe. He is a good man.
(Monica chuckles to herself. When she realizes she has been heard, she tenses and takes a sip of her tea.)
EILEEN
Monica, you have been awfully quiet. What are your thoughts on the matter?
MONICA
No thoughts. Just listening.
GERTRUDE
No thoughts? Please, Monica. We are curious. Share.
ALEXANDRA
You are always saying that women should speak their mind. Come on. If you have something to say, do not withhold it.
MONICA
I just sympathize with you all.
EILEEN
Really?
MONICA
Of course! You would like a partner. Someone who is more present. That is understandable.
GERTRUDE
Thank you.
MONICA (getting a little excited)
It is actually quite commendable and progressive. I wish more of the women I talked to saw marriage in this way. It should be about support–
ALEXANDRA (hesitant)
Yes. It is about support, but it is also a vow.
MONICA (even more excited)
Of course. But to say that you want more, that is exactly what I am trying to evoke!
EILEEN
Not more. I am quite happy with my life. It is just every so often it would be nice if Thomas showed a little interest in the family. He really is a good man.
MONICA
You all keep using “good man” to describe your husbands, even when you complain about them.
EILEEN
Because they are.
MONICA
Well, from what it sounds like, you are not demanding a great deal. You are not asking that he leave his work and spend all day with his children, cleaning the house, cooking dinner, and whatnot, correct?
ALEXANDRA
No! Not at all!
MONICA
Well, have they not forced you all to do that?
EILEEN
Who?
MONICA
Everyone.
EILEEN
No. No one has forced me to do anything. This is my life. My family is my life and my responsibility.
MONICA
Yes, but what about you as an individual? If you were to step away from your family/what would you do?
GERTRUDE
You cannot just take a break from your children, Monica.
MONICA
I am not saying that you should walk away, but do you have any activities that you do for yourself? Do you read books or paint or do anything that is not/part of your responsibilities as a mother?
ALEXANDRA
Monica, when you have children and a family one day you will see that there is no time for hobbies.
MONICA
But your husbands have time for theirs’.
ALEXANDRA
That is work.
MONICA
Yes, but if these men are so good, why is it that they cannot provide you with the same respect to expand your mind with knowledge and creativity that you give them?
GERTRUDE
Not all of us feel a desire to “expand our minds”.
MONICA
Do you not have the desire or do you just not have a choice? Would your husband, good men that they are, give you the liberty to take time for yourself to grow as individuals? Is that not the bare minimum of being a good person? Respect?
GERTRUDE
Monica, you do not really understand. All of your ideas are great in theory, but impractical. Motherhood is everything. I am not an individual anymore. I am a mother with three beautiful children.
MONICA
But your husbands–
EILEEN
They are fathers and care deeply about the kids too. They may not act like it or get so wrapped up in their own minds that they don’t seem to care, but they do. They are good men.
MONICA
And yet you all wish they would be around more. Perhaps you have just convinced yourselves that they are “good” because the reality that you have all lost your sense of self is so much more difficult to swallow!
(Everyone stares at her in astonishment.)
MONICA
I am going to clean up in the kitchen.
PATRICIA
Yes. Good idea. I will help you. We shall be back in a moment.
(Monica and Patricia get up and walk out the door into the kitchen.)